lol
this dumb. butt sometimes it is funny.
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Reviews for "Megaman X: 'the MR'"
Nice Job
I have been a fan of Megaman for as long as I can remember and you did a great job with this little cartoon.
Some complaints I have though: 1) Megaman and Axl have too high pitched voices
2) I don't know but for some reason everytime someone said Maverick it made me cringe. It just seemed like you were pronouncing it wrong or something it just sounded wrong to me.
And thats about it. I guess I'm off so view your other submissions on Megaman
it was cool...
the characters looked good and everythingthing and it went long enough....i didnt get alot of it but then i dont know much bout megaman...also AXL's voice seemed a lil muffled compared to the others ...still tho pretty cool.
Shadowii2 responds:
True, some parts are like that only people who know about Mega Man X series get them well, meanwhile when others dont.
Also I agree what you said about Axl's voice.
Thanks for your review.
Hmmmm.....
Your animation skills and concept have lots of potentials, and yes like you said you should improve the jokes, since this is meant to be funny, not plot-oriented or fight-oriented. Until you discover new and better jokes, your animation will stagnate in its current state (which isn't bad, just could be better). However, I look forward to your next piece.
A suggestion: make your characters' personalities more defined, and violating audience expectations can give you incredible results! Try it and keep up the good work!
Shadowii2 responds:
Hmm, that your suggestion is good one, gotta see how I can turn it out to work.
Also about my animation, yeah, I could do a lot better but me being a lazy person with animating I mostly just do the animations way too easy way.
Anwyays, thanks for your review.
Some really jokes but seriously unoriginal.
- Good stuff -
The graphics were really nice relly nice and simple. My favourite part of this flash was the VA and lip-synching. I liked them the most because they were very cool and really sounded like it was from some sort of cheap sitcom (which is what this flash is sort of parodying). The inrto was very cool and I liked it alot. The choice of music was very nice and was out in all the right places.
- Bad stuff -
Although I liked the graphics there was some minimal problems with it: I found that there wasn't really enough shading (so if you put shading in you could make chacrters eem far away or closer) and the movement was sort of lacking alot. Maybe you could of put more of and effort intothe moving, rater than switching arund the different parts of the body(well that's what it looks like you've done) .
Shadowii2 responds:
About your good stuff picks:
Yeah, if you ever watch the previous flashes in this series for example you will see a big improvement in the graphics, lip-syncing, VA and in the whole animation style in fact, but jokes have gotten less good.
About your bad stuff picks:
Yeah, I have noticed that how I lack making the movements look better, I just do them cheap way that and hope it looks good, I should work on that. Also about the shading, I didnt put much shading on the characters because if the characters flip around the shades change the side so it would look weird, with masking that could be fixed though.
Oh well, anyway, thanks for your review.